Score: 8

"An experience"

submission: .<3

date: February 7, 2008

To someone who has been through an experience much like this one, it's a breathtaking flash that has to be watched over and over again. The music fit the desperate emotions well, and the general animation was alright- you hit the emotions well, and the artistic style was beautiful. There were pieces, though, that you could tell were rushed, but the emotion and message broadcasted helped to even out the small pieces that needed some improvement (as, someone said, the hands when they were touching the screens, and going to hold hands at the end). But overall, you really took my breath away with this. Very good job.

Score: 10

"Incredible..."

submission: These Are The Boring Bits

date: October 22, 2007

The philosophical bits were interesting, to say the least, and intriguing. I hadn't expected such a long flash, but even the lengthyest parts were made durable due to the adorable little birds in the background and the sheer weight of what was being said. This flash can be taken in so many ways, and in so many depths, and I am utterly impressed with the unique style, and the reality that this flash drills upon. This is by far the most incredible story I have seen put into a flash film. Excellent, excellent job. This is brilliant work. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Score: 6

"So Close!"

submission: The Pendant

date: March 13, 2007

With a horrible lack of patience, I almost.. almost clicked close during what seemed to be an extremely long sequence of feet walking. I'm glad I didn't. Your art is amazing, the sketchy characters and their action sequences are top quality. I realize that you requested no no-sound bashing, but I must.. just a little bit. Without sound, without music or words, the prolonged sequences (the walking and the antagonist on the cliff) admittedly became annoying and impatience grew. The action sequence made it worth the wait, of course, but even so.. I'd love to see this resubmitted with background music and words, typed or spoken.

Awesome stuff, though!